Monday, February 7, 2011

Elizabeth White
Intsructor: Richard Samuelson
English 102
5 February 2011
Extended Bibliography 3
Unit 1
1. Hoch, Charles. "Sheltering the Homeless in the US: Social Improvement and the Continuum of Care." Housing Studies 15.6 (2000): 865-876. EconLit with Full Text. Web. 7 Feb. 2011.
2. This article discusses the very reasons why the United States is struggling so much with homelessness, and what needs to be done to prevent from happening anymore. Hoch states: “Instead of fostering social improvement, housing policy should increase shelter security. National welfare to work policy in the US supports and rewards labor force participation. Local residential housing markets require similar efforts. As the poor receive more income, they do not escape poverty if local affordable housing choices remain few and costs high.” (Hoch, pg 866) So, why do these things need to change? How do these people end up homeless in the first place? Hoch takes a deeper look at stereotypes of people without a home. Many people different opinions of what the homeless “deserve” because of our previous misconceptions of why they’re homeless. Granted, statistically it is proven that many people are homeless because of things the majority of the population has no sympathy for. Whether it be drugs and alcohol, or are ex convicts; homelessness is still something to fix, even if we don’t think the human being “deserves it”. What many people do not consider are those with disabilities, or a foster child. Many disabled and previous foster children are homeless because they don’t have close family ties. When you’re in trouble you go to a family member or a close friend for help, but what is a person expected to do if they don’t have a family or close friends?

3. This source is credible because Hoch points out numerous statistics as far back as the 1980’s proving that how homelessness is being dealt with needs to anny up a little. What Hoch’s arguing is that yes, shelters are providing a service, but are they giving the homeless a means to succeed. Are shelters preparing these people to go back into the world, get a job, and be a contributing citizen? More likely than not, most shelters are there to do just that; to provide a shelter of someone’s head and give them some food. Now, this isn’t the shelters “bad doing” by any means. How are they supposed to help a major portion of the population when they have very little money circulating in?

4. I agree and disagree with this source. Hoch does make valid points that what’s being done to prevent homelessness is not enough, but what can we do? Where does that money come from? I believe it’s important to help those in need, but to what cost? Are people willing to risk their own financial security for the sake of a stranger that could very well be in the position they because of their own decisions? I would like to think that people of a community could put all accusations aside and help a person in need. Unfortunately, my general faith in humanity has squandered slightly over the past couple of years. But I still have hope!

1 comment:

  1. Bibliography #3

    1. Your MLA works-cited entry is correct.
    2. I like the fact that you talked about homeless people having no shelter but how does this tie in Baby Steps? Are people homeless due to the fact of their prior circumstances or they just want to be homeless? I liked that you used the author’s credibility to make your point. Include the statistics to back up the fact that homelessness is being dealt with needs to anny up a little. Who is the author aiming the article to? Who is the audience? I believe that you should either agree or disagree, not both. Make your argument strong so that we can believe what you are saying. Explain why your opinions in people have changed over the years. Add any questions about your source in the last paragraph.
    3. For improvement, you should tie in Baby Steps with the article. Use quotations from the author to make your point of agreeing/disagreeing stronger. Applying a reading as a lens is useful for improvement. You used your reading as a model-you organized your material well so that we focus on your presentation rather then just on content.
    4. Use the link I gave you in the first response as a reference. Try citing the author more throught your paragraphs.

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